I think I could've made it more clear that Mar vomited on Will's dick - if you remember the dream she described in the previous chapter it's easy enough. Otherwise, the visual cue of the wet towel isn't immediately obvious.
I don't know if the 3rd hidden girl works spatially on the couch, or even makes sense. But maybe still worth it for the surprise.
7 thoughts on “#568 – closure”
See, @Mr Ak? Closure!
No, I am as dense as it gets and this was extremely obvious for me
And I love you, Broseph.
This is easily one of my favorite pages. I didn't realize until rereading the first time that Mar definitely barfed on his dick, loved the reveal
I did not catch that the first time, always more layers to this comic!
I think the fact that the 3rd girl makes no sense spatially is the best part. Also I love panel 8, it's so economical