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I wish I'd led into this scene with a few more beats of Eve and Park. I guess it mirrors the first scene we see them in, but to me Eve's confession spills out too quickly. I regret sometimes abbreviated things like this early on, when I was imposing page limits on myself for whatever reason. Ultimately limitations allowed me to get a lot more work done and not be precious with ideas - important skills - at the cost of some moments that wanted to breathe more.