A favorite page of mine, working on a couple of dimensions at once. How the characters are photographed becomes important in these final stories. Their memories, their sense of self, how they are seen and want to be seen. On top of that, how they think others want to see them in this dating game. We certainly can't take their word for it - we need a fuller picture.
Of course I was setting this up as a tense night for Hanna and Will. Hanna has been rescued from the rain, wearing Will's clothes and linens. She's seeking cold dating advice even though she'd rather start from a foundation of intimacy. In another place and time THIS right here would've been the easy option. They're clearly both so frustrated and vulnerable - why not? We get the idea they both know the answer to that, but logic and learned experience haven't been put to the test for a while. This story is the test.